I really do like this. definitely of reasons of it gives a character a different perspective. I mean you are aware people are blind but you don’t hear about them much in stories so I liked how you took that on and you created him. although it was out there, I did kind of laugh about the porn but another thing that is amazing is that when someone is blind, other senses are enhanced and it’s quite miraculous that they gain something when it’s lost. Anyways, I like this entry a lot because of the ending which for sure ties in the whole thing.
Interesting perspective to write on for the challenge but it’s new and unexpected in a good way :)
@infinity, see? My study in ambiguity worked, you said “him” in your comments. It’s hard not to read a story w/o making your own character’s sex up, when one’s not available. So my entry works great, you were forced to pretend a sex.
Totally got the sexual ambiguity with the lack of pronouns and initial-based name. In modern parlance, if you say “partner” it does kind of connote a gay relationship though. Still, nice imagined scenario with a very sweet message at the end of the long porn discussion.
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