Ooh, so he’s some sort of tactile psychic? Nicely written and intense scene. I think the comma in the first sentence is unnecessary, but that’s a minor point. Overall, very exciting stuff.
Yes, Jonah can see an object’s memories, while Gretchen reads auras. They are both secret agents of some sort. Their enemy has them on a wild goose chase. :)
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