Might want to take a breath, let others post a few in between each one of yours.

Nice you have so much to share, but just as nice to leave room for others.

I have no idea what he means.. hope you do..

ANYways.

I think you’ve captured the feeling of being infatuated with someone so much that you yourself feel inadequate around them perfectly. :)

Nitpick, your should be you’re after each ‘cause’, the one at the end and the one at the end of the second stanza.

Also, the “then” at the end should be “than”.
Besides that and what elsha said, I can relate completely. Sometimes I feel even more extreme than this.

Sorry, havent been on in seven months, got a tiny bit carried away…

I love the rhymes in this poem. :D

A small nitpick- end of the third paragraph, I believe the “were” should be “we’re.”