Before anyone goes there, I know about the rhyme scheme. I’m not even sure this poem has one.

Very..well.. poetic.

Nice heartfelt poem..
Yes, there are structural issues .. but you knew that.

Love is learning
Love is caring
Love is other people sharing

Best part of the poem right there.
Cuz you can follow it up with something:

Love is old
Love is new
Love will always see you through.

Has a great rhythm with words fitting the rhyme.

i just reread MY PART of the poetry in my suggestion… I take it back..
Don’t use what i wrote… it’s too cheesy !! haha.. but you get my point! :)

yeah it jumps around in meter but it mostly rhymes! I think you have chosen a great topic too, :P

Just a small note: both instances of the word “its” should be “it’s”, since it is short for “it is”.

A well-worn topic, to be sure, but done decently.

Whoops, I’ll fix that. Thanks :)