The old familiar cliche.
But if it’s not broke, don’t fix it, right?

I enjoyed this.

A fun read and felt very in the moment. You do love zombies, don’t you, my dear.

Ahaa! A fellow, zombie loving Ficleter.. :Day I am proud my friend.

okay, so you let your character curse when they drop the camera, but then they say #2 for poop.. This just feels out of place. I think the piece would be be stronger (and more mature) without the #2 reference.
Other than that, it’s a great beginning for a zombie series and I wish I had time to write a sequel.. maybe later..

Ha, this was enjoyable. Cliche, no doubt, but nonetheless entertaining.

Thank ya, and I edited it!

Awesome! And I sequeled!

It may be zombies again, but the broken narration kept me interested throughout the whole piece.

Great job sweetheart. Let’s set this world on fire with our zombie love lol!!!