Its amazing how we always feel like its just us in that situation.
very nice, captured that jealous Flurry of thoughts really well.

Overall really good. Only a couple comments: not sure if “undertone” is right, i think you mean “tone”; “may as well haves” should be “may as well have”. “The billboard would have our commuters believe …” appears to be inconsistent POV.

You’ve captured a feeling that many recognize… the feeling of being exposed.