When Kyle says “You hated her” it’s not immediately clear who he’s talking about, since the beginning of the piece focuses on the step father.

Also, your tags are screwy.

But otherwise, a decent little story.

Thanks for the comments. I suck at tags. Must work on that. Gonna go edit this thing now….

It’s much clearer now. Well done.

And don’t worry, the first story I published was wacked-up too.