There’s a tragic turn of events. Nice job setting it up with a healthy slice of real life with teenage kids. Thanks for entering the challenge.

Wowwwwww, dude, this is not what I had in mind at all, I saw it as a single teenager who got an abortion, but jesus this is twisted. Good show!

I think this story makes the Sequel even more powerful. All this action and dialogue in this story, the setting up of all the characters, and the climactic crash. All followed by a simple short line that carries a ton of emotion in it. Nice!

I got nailed by the last line, and then the sequel killed me. Awesome.

Hot damn. This was good.

You co-won my challenge! I’ve written a story to announce it, put the info on my profile, and I will make a comment announcing your co-win on the story of your co-winner, as she happened to use the ‘Participate’ button, contrary to directions (I didn’t hold it against her). Thanks for entering!

Thanks muchly, THX!

I’ve never co-won anything before. 8)

Oh wow…