I’m intrigued. Modern day heist, but you named your perps after Butch and Sundance? Now I’ve got to backtrack and read the rest of this…

They’re not really that Parker and Longbaugh (AKA Butch Cassidy and The Sundance Kid). I’m reasonably sure those are aliases. But feel free to interpret as you like.

Fun scene with lots of potential and cool to see that some of those possibilities have been explored.

Again, nice tempo. The only thing I don’t like is the Eff Bee Eye bit; I think that actually takes away from it a skosh.