Very sad, moping piece, but I think that is what you were going for. I liked the little, personal details, like the necklace. The feeling is nigh universal, but it’s something like that makes it seem more real and personal to you.
Thank you. I was expressing a sad, moping feeling, although it might not be exactly what you suspect. I think that two things sort of came together nicely. Poetry vexes me though. I care more about posting poetry than I do about getting naked in public. It’s scary.
THX 0477
Robert Quick
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)