I can’t help it – I officially love your style of poetry. It’s so rough yet absolutely perfected at the same time. This is the kind of writing I aspire to when it comes to verse. Darn it I just love enjamberment.
One thing I’d suggest is changing ’haven’t’ to ’hadn’t’ in the fifth line from the end. The change of tense threw me off a bit.
The tone of realised nostalgia is great. Nice to see such a happy little poem for once.
Abby (LoA)