cute story! Only one little thing i would like to point out. you wrote: “I glared at the beach ball before throwing it back so fast that if it would slice anything that going near it.” I believe you were trying to say: “I glared at the beach ball before throwing it back so fast that it would slice anything near it” just a friendly tip :)
cute story! Only one little thing i would like to point out. you wrote:
“I glared at the beach ball before throwing it back so fast that if it would slice anything that going near it.”
I believe you were trying to say:
“I glared at the beach ball before throwing it back so fast that it would slice anything near it”
just a friendly tip :)
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