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Fascinating piece that begs one serious question — How the hell does a patient get left behind? :)

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I can answer that! In my little writing world in my head, she is the most dangerous crazy lady they had and they couldn’t deal with her without being seriously harmed, killed or eaten. (Yup she’s a cannibal to top it off and would have eaten someone if I had managed to write her escape) SO she got left behind to rot due to the danger of her and the fact that she has no family, blah blah blah and she survived on eating rats (would have been abandoned a long time) so it would have been exceptionally gruesome had I had more space…I think I’ll take it forward to Wattpad and continue it in to a longer story with more detail and all I just explained. Hope that is a sufficient answer :)

Ah, but that’s what sequels are for! :)

Oh no…haha I have trouble with trying to fit the details in to a section…I’d probably be stressing about getting it perfect to flow well between sections it would bug me like hell haha

Ah, the great asylum mystique.

I find it really interesting writing asylum stories for some reason…and with Halloween around the corner, I’m inspired to write horror genre

I kinda thought she was a ghost.. that would work, too.

Ooo… I like the line Elsha took. That seems to fit with the last section. Maybe they left her to rot, she did, and now she’s royally miffed.

I felt like “screaming madly/cackling madly/cackled madly” was repetitive and distracted from the mood. It might just be me, but I like it when different ways are employed to suggest a range of the same types of things.

Thank you for the comments! And thanks for pointing out the repetitive stuff >< I have such a bad habit of doing that! Thank you very much :)