Is there a reason why the last stanza became 4 lines with the sentence broken into half? My OCDness may just be talking, sorry.

Not really; and it’s fine. xD The lines came into my head while I was on a plane, so I typed it out on my phone, and it didn’t allow for a lot of room, so when I was typing it up here, my instinct was to make a fourth line. I’ll fix it, though, thanks.