I’m curious to see what happens next; there’s a lot left unexplained here!

Good details about the temperature of space, though. I have a feeling warmth is important if you’re going to be sailing the solar winds for extended periods.

The animosity is surely evident; there are some deep feelings here. It’s the sort of slice of life story that needs a view from the other’s perspective. Maybe a little misunderstanding, if you will… What can I say, Mr. Quick, you’ve inspired me.

Aw shucks. I’m just glad you appear to be back- in whatever form you choose.

Has potential to develop into a nice story

Congrats on the win, I liked how your story and prequel fit together, viewing that slice of life with two perspectives. Nice touch.

Thank you. The skillful addition of the prequel should be attributed solely to Mr. Bic’s talent.