Inspired by:

http://djahal.deviantart.com/art/Faction-121617043

Nice! The scene is set, the players are in position, it’s time for action! What happens next?

This is excellent, as always. I need to get in on this challenge. It looks like fun.

I really liked the imagery that you had going in the first paragraph. like how you talked about the visor optics and such was really detailed.
very good. :)

Great scene, very sci-fi heavy but not without sufficient human emotion and uncertainty to make the scene one to which we can relate. Fun stuff and definitely made me want to check out the challenge.