Lovely trio, and I like the very small scale story that they tell. It’s just a moment, but it feels very real and very present. Great use of the form.

The original concept stems from a half-remembered snippet of memory; someone somewhere saying that they could write a haiku about a falling apple before it hit the ground.

Very nice. :)

Nice images!

I enjoyed this! I didn’t catch the write-a-haiku-before-the-apple-hits-the-ground part, but now that I’m aware of it, it’s clearly visible in the poem. Good job!

Very well done. I can almost see the apple .

Very well done. I can almost see the apple .

Very well done. I can almost see the apple .

Very well done. I can almost see the apple .

Very well done. I can almost see the apple .