This was well written. The only issue I can point out is to remove the " at the end of the ficlet. But other than that I like how you used dialogue to describe what was going on and the teacher. It was humorous, but not in an untasteful way which I think was your strong point with this. :)
There are few ficlies to which that “Lie on floor/Try not to cry/Cry” meme applies to, but with that last line, you might just have reached it. This was great!
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