Unique take on time-travel. Great story, and it leaves much to be desired (background information), though it seems like you made the two characters too distant to work together (in Time Travel).. Unless Eric isn’t the main character. I’m excited to see you/someone else make something out of this.
This was a great read. I imagined Todd being in the future, trying to call future eric, and accidentaly calling past eric because of course in the future you can call any time you want. And the phone companies still mess things up in 2014, haha.
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