I had to reread a few of these stanzas to really understand them. ‘Seeping in through the eyes’ ‘careening over the lips’ (seeing/comprehending the word; saying/ speaking/ the word). There’s ambition and excitement and meaning here. It’s stirring, like a charismatic speech, or an ode to one. Like the process and relationship of language and inspiration from seed to tree. Welcome back. Well done :)
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Tad Winslow