I like the ending line. I have no idea what it means, but I like it. Very ‘in their heads’ moment but with just enough action thrown in.

Thank you. That’s a transition, leading to the sequel when we learn of her reasons for going against the Warlock’s orders. I need a better name for some of these things. I realized Yareth was just a reworking of Gareth so I switched to Narsit, which is a lot like Mrs Sparsit but heck, it’s not a fantasy name so it’s better.