Comments on The Gods Are Restless by 32 ^2

32 ^2

Thanks to HSAR for bringing to attention my glaring mistakes. Ugh!

(Note to self: late night writings are to be saved as drafts.)
- Posted about 6 years ago.
The Night Angel

This is awesome, would love to see a sequel where the gods awaken or something similar.
- Posted about 6 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
JonB

I too love this Big theology stuff (with a capital B). I particularly like Mariana…the weight of the world on her pressured heart.
- Posted about 6 years ago.
AnthonyTNT

I enjoyed this one. I like the metaphor and imagery used to illustrate what’s really going on.
- Posted about 6 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Conjoiner, Rejoinder, Poisoner, Concealer, Revelator [[Wednesday]]

I don’t know. I think this is too little for one story. It would be great if each part was given its own sequel, so that we could know why.
I normally love your writing 32^2, but I think this needs work.
~Wednesday
- Posted about 6 years ago.
32 ^2

@Wednesday: Then treat this as a prologue and write a sequel about one of the gods.
- Posted about 6 years ago.