Dude, your line about the mountainside shrouded in clouds looking disturbed is amazing. This is a perfect example of painting a huge picture with few words.
It has a confident, quiet stride to it that sets up the next one nicely. I like it.
I agree with THX. You’ve captured the characters nicely and it’s a smooth transition to the next installment.
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JonB