Great start to a story. I look forward to reading more from you. You’ve got my curiosity as to where it’s going.

One minor nitpick, if I may. “Cloak”, no second “c”.

Thank you, I love hearing back from my readers. In my opinion there is nothing greater than the joy of knowing that those who read my stories like them and appriciate my work.

If I may be so bold as to suggest a spellchecker. Also there seems to be quite a few awkward punctuations resulting in run on sentences.

ooohhh very dark and eery, mystical as well. cool!