Lol! The twist in this was great and I love the nonchalantness of the character’s thought process—because in his world this is normal! And in this world gender doesn’t equal “sexual parts”!
Nicely done writing wise as well! I’m never one for having a while story in one paragraph so that’ll be my advice—space out his thoughts! Or don’t, the fast paced is kinda nice. Regardless, it was nicely written other than that!
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