hahaha, that was hilarious!
me wants more! (as in more to the story cuz its good)
Brilliant. The dialogue is great, I’d love to see more!
Haha. That’s wonderful. Especially the last line. I made my mom read it.
ohhhh myyy. how awkwardddd. very nicely written! can’t wait to see more ;)
Reminds me of those little page enders in Readers’ Digest, only so much more delicious.
Oh, my God, that was awesome. Made me laugh out loud for serious. Thank you, haha.
God, I love this. And the prequel. You, sir, are awesome. :D
God, I love this. And the prequel. You, sir, are awesome.
:D
paired with the prequel this is damn brilliant
yikes lol that hits a little close to home lol but awesome story!
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