A) pretty smart con for fifth grade, I’ve often thought of trying something like that, but you know me..
B) how did June get a gander at his pencil?
C) I hope that last line was spoken with conviction and a single raised eyebrow smirk.
D) I wasn’t that informed in fifth grade.. wow, I was sheltered…

you should have grown up on lawler street lol

snickers Leave it to you to write about fifth-grader and his attempt at love.
I liked the way you explained his “hustle”, by calling each component an “ingredient”.

I t don’t take mh imagination to write a true story…still , it’s funny cuz it’s true…

Funny. I like it. Maybe put “was” in italics for emphasis on the last line.