fianlly, i finished it. i really had trouble with the stable time loop thing!

well i must say it is both kinky and weird.. I’d never have imagined a rape victim being so willing, especially with the half-transitioned body of her rapist, but that’s what makes the story weird and kinky.

hm, maybe the storyline is not quite as clear as i would have liked.
loop 0) girl gets raped. gets a visit from her future self, who has had a sex change due to the rape trauma. future self is in the process of reverting back to female because she/he is unhappy with the result. creates time machine and visits younger self to change some of the unhappiness.
loop n) younger self after getting visit from older self decides to still create time machine and still have sex change, but this time around be happy about it. can you say “science whore”?

hmm so far your definitely in first place, though the writing could be better.

O.O;