This is so freakin awesome. man if i had to judge this it would be the winner. not justr because you are my life long friend or the scene in your old car with the setups on the dash fifteen years ago but because it was just good freakin good a gaxzillion baxojigillion pencils.

That is like a slap on the ass by lipstick kiss elbow glove

perfect ending to a perfect ficlet! I love the exact way you describe the lyrics, so vivid and despairing. :D you deserve more than pencils..

aww shucks guys, you are very sweet and clearly blinded by my personal charisma… which is fine by me , that’s why I have personal charisma , so I can charism the helll out of people;)

You are a great writer! WOO! I like how you made cooties into a waaaaaaayyy worse thing than kids do. Good Job!

That was wonderful! I’ll be sure to get my vaccination right away…