This is interesting.

A bit predictable and bland, but a good story nontheless.

In case it isn’t obvious, the last lines refer to the HP Touchsmart. And while I LOVE it.. the only annoyance is the sensitivity to stray flying critters that are attracted to the light that emanates and causes craziness to ensue. It’s almost “haunting” at times. At others, it’s like fighting an unseen enemy. Windows open and close at random, sometimes even floating around or off the screen. ;)

good work jen i was expecting something creepy but it was still good

Hey, thanks for entering! I love this story. Its funny and well written!