I really enjoyed this one. I can not wait to see what happens next. Please write more!!

this was really good i even felt that old sting when he said husband this was very creative i hope you win

Thanks. :] I’m glad I was able to make you feel that blow! I aim to make you feel something, at least.

i think this secret admirer is barking up the wrong tree :) nice inner monologue.

Brilliant, brilliant characterization that took root from just a few suggested words! I absolutely loved it.

Really liked this. Sweet and bitter, I guess would be a good way to describe it.

Hmmm… I’m seeing a number of avenues for this character to bloom.

I’ve actually thought of keeping up a sort of mini series with him as a the main character! :]