silently?? I’d scream! or was she deaf? she didn’t hear her? hmm. sad sad ending. sudden, and tragic, and sad.

rivetting story

I see the cliff’s edge as a metaphor, elsha. She left, no time for reaction, just gone. That’s the emptiness that is felt right now. Good show!!!!

okay, metaphors are silent. I’ll give you that. :)

Interesting. The story is crisp and sharp until the last sentence, then we’re left to wonder what you meant.

That was great! I love stories that leave us to wonder. :)