Thanks for the challenge Lillie, hope you don’t mind something a little personal. I wrote this to my wife on her 40th when she was worried she might be over the hill. Apologies if this is too much information for some of our younger members!

Feh, we’ll get over it lolz. When i was reading it i got sort of an ice cream man tune in my head. lolz Nice rhymes. 4/5

lol! hmm if my husband wrote me a poem like this, well first I’d playfully slap him with it, then he’d probably chase me to the bedroom anyway…
This was naughty. But very well-written. :)

That’s pretty much what happened

It’s a wonderfully creative gift for your wife! I’m sure she really enjoyed it. And personally, more mature stories end up catching my eye because they attract the reader in a different way as well as give more to the imagination. Good job.

great job!

Anything that can make a wife feel sexy, desired, and laugh deserves a five out of five.

Great job.

And the last line could as easily read: “And to me you still feel… soooooooo bad :)”

mmmm, missed that Coccinella.