Ooh, this could almost go into the Diabolically Villainous Challenge as well. Either way, a bit edgy, but still quite riveting.

Thanks for entering!

Whoa. Creepy. Intriguing. I really like yours!

oh this was good good good i didnt know till the end?
bravo!!

Ooooh so creepy! I didn’t expect that ending.

Yep, that’s a good one!

Loved it beginning to end. One of my very favorites.

Ooooooo!

Woo woo! Like a good movie…one of those simple but riveting scenarios.

Great impact. Chiller story.

Great, gave me goose bumps.

Oh, dammit! I post my (seemingly) original story, only to go back and read the other contestant’s entries and see that YOU got there before I did!

C’est la vie.

Great story!

Haha, also just read this one after Eloquent Mess’s …. talk about the collective unconscious, people ;-)

Oh that was a good story, got me in the end.

Oh that was a good story, got me in the end.

Whoaaa now.
Scared me.
This is great.