Heheh.. great ending… excellent dialog!
Love stories like this.
Was great to read another one of your stories Stovohobo!

“I can’t run a search on Kinetico without raising every birdie they’ve got.” That line just tastes good.

i like this it is good nice work stovo

hey is this a shout out to automatic jack if so one cixiliion pencils.

It’s whatever you want it to be, MJY. I can’t exactly keep up with the limitless store of half-obscure references in your head.

lol hey did you see in my story about oreo the bar was name stinky stovo’s pub.

I had that line actually split into two that sounded better, but the character limit stripped it down to the bare bones—and even then I hit 1024. Thanks though—if you have any suggestions for it, I’m ready to revise. =)

awesome! the dialogue is a strength, plus the twist ending is brilliant.

There. Hopefully it sounds better—and I still got to keep my ficly nirvana. Thanks for the switch, kwatz!

Wow, I loved this! Fantastic dialogue (I agree with everyone else, that “birdie” line was brilliant), and well paced. The twist ending was delicious!

The “birdie” line was good. I loved the Babycake though. I’ve always wanted to call someone that after shooting them. (Not that I actually want to shoot people, but if I were a Femme Fatale, it’s what I’d say) Thanks!

I love stories that seem like they have many, many other stories lurking behind ’em, and this is one of them. The characters and the setting are just really real! And “Babycake” was great.

Is it wrong to be aroused by a computer? Maybe it’s the “James Bond” attitude of the system, maybe it’s the frustration with idiotic men, maybe it’s how she handles her firearms…

Fantastic fic, friend.

Oops. Forgot to rate.

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