gives me the chills.
I adore good poetry. 5 pencils, I dare say!
the repetition adds so much to this poem. It’s dark and yet beautiful, like ink on paper creating a masterpiece.
wow! Thanks Elsha! The villanelle form demands repetition and rhyme in a very specific sequence and I wrote it as an exercise in self-discipline – it’s been very hard to write another.
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)
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