how could the most beautiful residency of 08 possibly strike fear into the heart of tranquility? lol sounds more like jealousy than fear to me..

Great concept – you create a flowered world where Fear and Tranquility are friends, and John Mayer an obscure rival, and it’s kinda compelling. It’s obvious from the typo’s though, that you scribbled this off and pressed publish before you’d let it simmer down – or at least gone over it once or twice with a critical eye… Rather read your own story a few times before you invite others to do the same! Nicely written though :)

I smile at the irony.

Kendall you write very nice descriptors in your work.