ouch! makes me want to put my fingers in my ears and wince before the explosion!

nice build-up to the kaboom!

Such a dark twist at the end! You paint a picture of humble beginnings, but is that a reason, or the guy leaving, reason enough, to blow herself up? I’m waning philosophical…

man this is just creepy i really like it

That took a few times through to get the gist of what’s going on.

Deep, beautiful piece.

Nice lyrical feel to it. I understood all but the last two. Tragic but with a sense of resilience about it.