I spent a bit more time on this story than most of my others. I hope you guys like it.

Wow.

I think that deserves a bit more comment than “wow” but that’s all I’ve got right now.

So I’ll say it twice.

Wow.

Wow. This is story was just amazing. I loved it! Thanks for entering!

To echo the sentiments of others, wow.

Every word had a reason for being where it was in this piece. I felt that the last line just made it especially powerful. Great work.

I love the descriptions of Fear’s action! Total maniac. I feel you can ditch the last sentence, though; I think it’s clear enough it’s Death and not directly saying it would make it more mysterious.