Well written mate. But honestly you must be awesome because you write so well. We look to you for inspiration.lol

haha.. very very NON awesome in it’s awesomeness!!!
Loved it – every protagonist needs an anti-hero!
Great sequel!

bows If I am awesome, then part of my awesome is to remind myself that I could be actually non-awesome at any moment. Awesomeness is vigilance in the craft of it.

Besides, I literally thought of the story because I didn’t want to put an LoA after my handle – looked funny to me. Now how non-awesome is that? (Now if there was a badge or something, I’d be all over it. :D )

the hero learns that he is no longer a hero once he catches the final villain!

I like the reference to Johnny Dangerously…

Awesome, and I totally get it. There is always the temptation to recede and just be the awesomeness, and in that there is merit. I salute you!

Masonic. Appropriately.