OK Brodo, you want critical. Just read Regret in Reverse, and this one. Liking the way you create ominous, looming about-to-break dramatic scenarios. But both pieces have the feel of a slightly incomplete beginning – as though you’ve imagined up a big concept behind the story, then written it with just too few lines for the story to feel fully, satisfyingly revealed. Going to read more…
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}
Coccinella
Construct of a Mind