Thanks for submitting an entry! :)

(It’s going to be harder than I thought to keep from actually making comments on these entries. ;) )

made a couple changes.. hoping to clarify the first paragraph better..

why doesn’t the person judging ever want to make comments i don’t understand that.

Hmm interesting…

Inspired me to sequel… albeit two months later.

Good story!

Very fun, and picturing you as the skillful, tree-climbing assassin is quite amusing. That second paragraph starts with one heck of a long sentence, something I do often enough, as I am now, but I still felt like I should say something.