haha, way to shut up the talk radio guy! hope she called from a pay phone…

Oh no! They found me out! ::shifty eyes::

(5 pencils, amigo for a job well done)

I don’t believe that thing about never writing endings… you’re rattling them off by the dozen!!

Geez, this is one shifty radio station! Two implied murders and some mysterious occurence on a paticular Wednesday. I like the way you pulled this off; I could hear the rather perky host, the sketchy voice on the other end, and the instant dissapation of any enthusiasm from his voice.

I’m watching my back. Creepy Almost as creepy as ‘Play Misty For Me’

I appreciate the comments! I feel quite inspired. It’s been quite a while since I’ve felt that way.

yeah what your feeling right now is called ficly high, see my theory is that it is not actually the art but the praise that is causing your brain to release endorphins. Thx has taught a system to where that feel back will come indefinitely. it is called the ten to one method i practice it myself and it leaves no ficly i have ever wrote unread. For every one you write comment on ten and you will be awesome awesome to the tenth power. that is my noob advise. you are doing great. You rock.

hell, you’re too good for a novice!haha, i enjoyed reading this one! it’s like im having goosebumps!!

i’ll give you 5 pencils!!

excellent job!

-tas_13

@ MJY: I’m a little far away from meeting the quota…I need 102 more comments before I write another story. And I thought I was doing so well!

The story is pretty good; I don’t think it’s your best work though. Seems a little cliched in the dialogue—but the reference to the sexuality is nice. It’s a good bridge for readers to say, “huh, never noticed that…”

I like it!

This story has now been tied into my “Missing Mister Mess” series. Check it out here:

http://ficly.com/stories/5424