Aww, what a cute poem. It’s extremely simple and in a way, childish but the last stanza definitely makes up for it.

Simple, clear, concise. I like it.

awesome. i’ll give you 5 pencils. haha,

I’m sorry because frankly
I fell in love with you…

i like it!! you’re good. i’ll give you that.haha

Simple and full of feeling. Also full of the subtle and not-so-subtle ways we distort the meaning of “sorry”. No idea why I’ve missed reading your writing on ficly til now!

I apologize if this is purposefully bad, but any poem that rhymes “mad” with “bad” sets my teeth on edge.

well look at the first comment and they got it right. i wanted it to sound kind of childish and usually i dont force rhymes but when i was little i did… so thats kind of why i did it.