I was thinking of doing a mini series with this but feel free to sequel!

this really hits home. five pencils.

This is a very strong piece. My favorite line and the one I find that most stands out is, “I have survived so far, but haven’t lived.”

I definitely support the idea of you turning this into a mini series only if there was a direct subject to focus on. Will the sequels feature him not being able to go home or life after the war?

I’d love to make a sequel but because this is such a strong piece, I wouldn’t want to write something that can’t surpass its predecessor.

Also, it should be the 43rd division, not the 43th. :]

Is this my son? Coming home at last?

Fear, get your stuff. You’re not going to be staying much longer.

this is really good sis, deep thoughtful. and just good. =)

wow, what a powerful piece! Kudos