Comments on The Good Witch by Jessica Brown

Coccinella

the description of the house would’ve made Roald Dahl proud…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
THX 0477

Classic fairy tale set-up, wicked step-mother and all (and really, did you have to go with two awful step-sisters?), BUT the bottle intrigues and worries me. And overall, the narrative voice and flow work quite well.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

hey, this could have been an entry in the poison/medicine challenge as well. good work. I’m with THX, the two stepdaughters were unnecessary!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Aurelia

Agree with Coccinella. “Rotted wooden pancakes” is great.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

Love it.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Branwen Hernandez

Methinks the “Good Witch” might not be so good… I like it!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Stovohobo

You’re very good at describing a setting. The “Suzie was too young to read the label” line really cinched up the “darker” side to it.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Stovohobo

You’re very good at describing a setting. The “Suzie was too young to read the label” line really cinched up the “darker” side to it.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5