Comments on Non-Fiction Part I by Jesse Blake

Coccinella

I like the way we twist round from the child’s lostness to the mother’s lostness to the narrator’s lostness…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
DoItForScience

Losticity?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Jesse Blake

Well, that’s what really happened. We were all lost.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Ronnie

It is a comment on the state of the world today. Everyone is spoiled rotten and we have all forgotten what it is to be nice to each other. Good job saving the girl though. :)
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

Part 2!!! PART 2!!!!!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

Wow where is part ttwo? Why are you doing this to me? Mad skillz jesse.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Jesse Blake

haha, thanks guys. Unfortunately, there is no part 2… I never saw the daughter or mother again.
- Posted over 10 years ago.