Dang Forrest your writing has some squabbles about it

you should put a hyphen so it would be ad hyphen cock lol

Sergeant sure knows how to break up a fight, must be years of practice. you know these characters very well, i can tell you’re in their heads.
Welcome to ficly, and beware, it gets addicting!

ELSHA YOU ARE A PERV

addicting? M-JY is my roommate, I was addicted before I was a member. This 1024 character limit is REALLY going to bother me. This could have been a MUCH better story if I’d had space to tell the actual story instead of telling a story ABOUT the story. I still think about that girl and pray that she didn’t feel it. When I cry, it’s her I’m crying about.