Comments on Too Good To Be True(ElshaMightyMess #1) by ElshaHawk (LoA)

mama murph (LoA)

That’s it, I’m tellin Drew! You SL%#!!!!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
mama murph (LoA)

Luv Ya, Sweetie!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

oh there are plans for this girl… big devious plans!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
laura laura pants

I think you’re missing a “you” in this line: “And all do is..?”

Unless of course you met the character limit and had to leave it out. lol :)
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

Oh dear… Fullilove? This does not bode well for the world…

Great beginning to what I hope will be a wonderfully wicked story.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

thanks laura! fixed!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

And so it begins…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
K-Jellybean

yummy
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
THX 0477

Oh, this sounds like it could a lot of different ways. Kinda funny last name there for your protagonist. Does James Bond show up at some point?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

just read the last chapter had to skip to the front and start reading. awesome setup
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5