Comments on Home Is Where Ralph Is.(Mess,Mjy And Elsha#3) by Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

My turn. ;-)
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
K-Jellybean

oooo gay lovers in the mafia? forbidden love :O
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
THX 0477

Third to last line has either a missing name or an extra comma. That whole jump to the assassin felt out of place, but I’ll go with it for now.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

fixed it
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

MJY i find the randomness that you introduce amusing.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5